tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post4962398386631074685..comments2023-05-15T19:30:02.135+05:30Comments on The City in July: LittleboypoemMonidipahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04143479676876050629noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-87489278410759286312008-03-29T10:40:00.000+05:302008-03-29T10:40:00.000+05:30Poetryfor you will never suffice,like the awkward ...Poetry<BR/>for you will never suffice,<BR/>like the awkward gap between<BR/>laughters, when words are<BR/>too wrong<BR/><BR/><BR/>ei jaygata odbhut byaathar( m mad re!)<BR/>but i'v loved this one...n d beginning tooo...lovely!Pongy Papayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03556978047897531342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-14375040469482478072008-03-22T15:38:00.000+05:302008-03-22T15:38:00.000+05:30came to this blog of yours after a long time...i l...came to this blog of yours after a long time...i loved the last line...<BR/>its beautifully written.<BR/>me likes.little boxeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07011839933124378047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-11226342923848245782008-03-21T21:08:00.000+05:302008-03-21T21:08:00.000+05:30i thought this bit was befitting."You tell me that...i thought this bit was befitting.<BR/><BR/>"You tell me that silence<BR/>is nearer to peace than poems<BR/>but if for my gift<BR/>I brought you silence<BR/>(for I know silence)<BR/>you would say<BR/> "This is not silence<BR/>this is another poem"<BR/>and you would hand it back to me."<BR/>-Leonard Cohen<BR/><BR/>I guess someone might have brought this to your notice, but i added it all the same.Aruni RChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16123981777432496949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-78783197917105914892008-03-19T22:03:00.000+05:302008-03-19T22:03:00.000+05:30And we trail off into quiet murmurs of words half-...And we trail off into quiet murmurs of words half-said, then left unsaid.<BR/>For there is no need, none at all.<BR/>And silence is poetry.<BR/><BR/>By the way, it reminded me of this:<BR/>http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/624.htmlSaturnalia's Offspringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12933063777921144158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-17158830214431957242008-03-19T10:55:00.000+05:302008-03-19T10:55:00.000+05:30I like the structure of the poem.A very nice dimin...I like the structure of the poem.<BR/>A very nice diminuendo without losing volume.29Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03188748622368570250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-22401757076747700272008-03-15T19:20:00.000+05:302008-03-15T19:20:00.000+05:30Love this re. Can I put it up on my blog??Love this re. Can I put it up on my blog??Liquifierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01564445347633521093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-84068996713877237962008-03-13T00:30:00.000+05:302008-03-13T00:30:00.000+05:30your poetry is likethe fresh cup of teaon a winter...your poetry is like<BR/>the fresh cup of tea<BR/>on a winter morning,<BR/>the lone squirrel hesitant <BR/>yet adventurous,<BR/>the first evening wind<BR/>after the hot summer day,<BR/>the flute trail of <BR/>a gypsy band,<BR/>the promising crevices<BR/>for a cobweb rainbow,<BR/>i crave for more<BR/>and more....addabajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00964229745250579006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-24370310031649939822008-03-12T01:47:00.000+05:302008-03-12T01:47:00.000+05:30well,unable to decide if me's able enough to comme...well,unable to decide if me's able enough to comment on poetry like this.so I just say it's amazing,loved it.the basuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06565173481265925156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-52641896395478888592008-03-10T13:52:00.000+05:302008-03-10T13:52:00.000+05:30Is this poetry? Because I don't understand poetry,...Is this poetry? Because I don't understand poetry, but I like this.Arthur Quiller Couchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06780781021139169243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-78128507866516205472008-03-01T01:20:00.000+05:302008-03-01T01:20:00.000+05:30with the authority of an erstwhile arse poetica an...with the authority of an erstwhile arse poetica and the love of an always ahona i tell you- thou art the finest poet of our generation, and the most versatile.<BR/><BR/>Chumbon and Champagne to thee!Arse Poeticahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093550610028845448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-42259157336609756682008-02-29T00:55:00.000+05:302008-02-29T00:55:00.000+05:30Poetry for you, likeso many things to be saidand s...<I>Poetry for you, like<BR/>so many things to be said<BR/>and so few excuses to start.</I><BR/><BR/>this also.sotrue.<BR/><BR/>i wanna blogrollyou plis?weevil girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15519897714465144353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-21657437259015737432008-02-27T23:48:00.000+05:302008-02-27T23:48:00.000+05:30i love the laughing at itself because of the point...i love the laughing at itself because of the pointlessness part, very true.Doubletake, Doublethink.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09600185883998918369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-14753089371789929682008-02-24T10:49:00.000+05:302008-02-24T10:49:00.000+05:30amazing!!amazing!!The Mad Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15380811172893180071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-29002768295413202782008-02-24T00:55:00.000+05:302008-02-24T00:55:00.000+05:30How welldo you elude rhyme - too silly, tootrivial...<I><BR/>How well<BR/>do you elude rhyme - too silly, too<BR/>trivial too clumsy to gather<BR/>in words.<BR/></I><BR/><BR/>I loved this. :)...https://www.blogger.com/profile/15346467080714817466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-1980130552541982742008-02-22T23:16:00.000+05:302008-02-22T23:16:00.000+05:30Me likey mucho. Mucho.Going through it i visualize...Me likey mucho. Mucho.<BR/>Going through it i visualized Gael Garcia Bernal in The Motorcycle Diaries and Emile Hirsch in Into The Wild. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-41961991931982741092008-02-21T19:38:00.000+05:302008-02-21T19:38:00.000+05:30I like. Much.I like. Much.Royal Bengal Tigresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10054027709029475488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-77452465521582557122008-02-21T19:15:00.000+05:302008-02-21T19:15:00.000+05:30The cliches that are meant to end all cliches?The cliches that are meant to end all cliches?Joychaserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13752478898265978956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-31689112800304851452008-02-21T17:07:00.000+05:302008-02-21T17:07:00.000+05:30:):)Sikan DeRougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16528714660129428698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-16532034945339269852008-02-21T10:28:00.000+05:302008-02-21T10:28:00.000+05:30ur lines have that quality that makes them come ba...ur lines have that quality that makes them come back to people who read them at certain situations & times when they can relate to them. b'ful as always.Amazing Grazehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17933242901578313380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-16153816683241525932008-02-21T00:32:00.000+05:302008-02-21T00:32:00.000+05:30Very nice, this.Very nice, this.rukminihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15067647254743558242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-13827956781661865172008-02-20T23:04:00.000+05:302008-02-20T23:04:00.000+05:30has that smell of 'impromptu creativity' coming of...has that smell of 'impromptu creativity' coming off it. <BR/>Let that fire live!! <BR/>:)<BR/><BR/>p.s- I still don't know if I can have ur link at my blog or not ?What's In A Name ?https://www.blogger.com/profile/09721657703722868039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-7179374670660337272008-02-20T22:09:00.000+05:302008-02-20T22:09:00.000+05:30I have to say- I'm generally very picky about most...I have to say- I'm generally very picky about most poems, and one of my basic criteria is that it should rhyme.. <BR/>But melikes this one very much, even though it doesn't.. <BR/>Good going!Magically Boredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00689084060646607534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-84872543900846433862008-02-20T21:24:00.000+05:302008-02-20T21:24:00.000+05:30i wont spoil it by going into long drawn out analy...i wont spoil it by going into long drawn out analysis of the poem, it just intoxicated me and thats it.AbhijanBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11643675908037948290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16979679.post-25179547356913036412008-02-20T20:52:00.000+05:302008-02-20T20:52:00.000+05:30I like how the poem starts with longer phrases and...I like how the poem starts with longer phrases and images and slowly dies down, a decrescendo into silence. The last stanza sort of rambles, the sentence structure and clearness of meaning breaking down into sleepy mutters that make little sense, like talking in your sleep and dozing off imperceptibly. <BR/><BR/>I like this. Goodstuff. Full of your usual poignant imagery and strange glimpses of random beautiful things. I love how you combine beauty and self revelation. Sort of like Sylvia Plath except less tortured.Elendilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04358056466348715555noreply@blogger.com